Fan Fic Reviews

Zombieland

I thought this fanfic was very unoriginal. The author basically put himself and his little sister into a block of the story and twisted the actual events of what happened in the movie. The main character Ryan basically put himself in the part where the characters go to Bill Murray's house for a place to live and basically kills Bill Murray with a Ghostbusters pun at the end. Not much effort for a fanfic but it's pretty alright.

Chuckie FF

This fanfic was well researched and well structured. It had many of the elements the original story had such as gore, swearing, violence, cruelty etc. It opened up the idea for another sequel to the Chuckie series and it wasn't a bad idea too. This particular fanfic centres around the children of Chuckie and what Glenda, his daughter, goes through in order to resurrect he father so he can continue his streak of mayhem. The story ends leaving the reader with the information that Chuckie is back and is ready for a few more kills with the target of his ex-girlfriend in mind. Good ending to a decent fanfic.

300 Random

This fanfic was basically a random mockery of the movie 300, It lacked everything. EVERYTHING. I'd summarise it as basically a really bored kid with nothing better to do than to waste people's time thinking they are about to read some legit fanfic when it's actually a time waster. Enough said.

Four Bro's Fanifc

This fanfic is basically the aftermath of what happens once the movie is over. A quick scene to show how Bobby deals with his brothers death due to his actions. It's well structured as the writer doesn't mention what Bobby's whacking at and for what reason until the end. The fanfic also takes all the original material from the film and basically just picks up from where it left off, answering some questions about how the brothers mourned the death of their youngest, Jack. It was a good fanfic, well thought-out and well written.


South Park Grown Up Fanfic

I was expecting something comedic as I figured a fan of South Park would've gone for that approach. This south park fanfic was based on the future of the current South Park characters. It gives off a gritty and dark vibe as in the very beginning of the prologue we understand that Stan Marsh's parents have recently divorced and it is suggested that this wasn't a suprise to Shelly and Stan. When I finally decided to read the beginning of this fanfic I realised that it was a prologue and not a full story. It was a good prologue, it created suspense as to what happened to Kyle. This was a big suprise as usually in the South Park series the bad things usually happen to Kenny. This Fanfic prologue was very interesting and it had a good idea and basis also, I look forward to tracking this fanfic and seeing what this person comes up with in this particular fanfic about South Park.

Wizard of Odds

This Family Guy fanfic incorporated many of the aspects the original series which is why I found it amusing. As Family Guy has made parodies of Star Wars and well, many other things, this particular fanfic writer developed a very interesting parody of the wizard of oz. For example, Having Verne Troyer, also known as 'Mini-me', as one of the munchkins in the story and having Diane Sawyer as the Good Witch of the North. Completely random? Well that's a Family Guy Fanfic at its best. It was well structured but in the beginning of the fanfic I was lead to believe that the story had a lot to do with 'Herbert the Pervert' rather than another 'Bryan & Stewie adventure', I guess it was just for false entertainment but other than that it was a good fanfic.

'When First we met'-Family Guy


I was not impressed with this particular 'Family Guy' fanfic, simply because it was too dramatic. Family Guy is a show that is considered to be a comedy is is basically for laughing purposes. Browsing through other fanfics of Family Guy, there were many with the same aspects as the original show had; Aspects such as toilet humour and random flashbacks. This fanfic was obviously not meant to make people smile. It was written rather to over-emphasise the drama of the addition of Bryan into the lives of the Family. I've read better fanfic.

Son Of Hancock

I thought this Hancock Fanfic was really good. It gave the new character mystery and traits of Hancock,e.g. Facial Structure & Drinking Habits. This made it pretty obvious that the new character could very possibly be the Son of Hancock. The Fanfic created mystery within the new character and also made him seem like possible threat to Hancock which basically opens up the idea of a Sequel for the Movie. It was a short and sweet Fanfic yet it was the right amount of words for setting up a new story and I look forward to reading the next few chapters in this particular fanfic.

That 70's Show-'Burn'.


I thought this fanfic was ok. It did incorporate many of the traits the original script had such as immaturity, hangovers and the mention of marijuana. Although it seemed to be a decent fanfic, I picked up on something odd, where in my opinion it seemed that the writer used the wrong terminology in saying that Eric and Jackie got drunk of Hyde's ''special brownies''. Since these ''special brownies'' contain marijuana I don't think saying that they got drunk off them is the write thing to say as you don't drink brownies? Anyways, the fanfic was somewhat entertaining with Eric and Jackie getting back at the rest of the gang with a prank of their own with a happy ending as a resolve for the end of the story.

Avatar Fanfic


This Fanfic was well thought-out and well structured. It was easy to follow who was talking as the different characters in the Fanfic would talk in different ways about different things so it was easy to differenciate. It was quite entertaining as it was easy to see the writer of this particular fanfic was into Classic Rock music and incorporated the artists and song lyrics into the Avatar Fanfic, even though Avatar is based on 180 years into the future it was entertaining that there were some people in this particular time that still listened to Jimi Hendrix and Pink Floyd. The character of Grace was well portrayed in the fanfic as it had some of the similiar traits of the original character from the Movie. e.g. Even though she works with children she still uses curse words and smokes etc. The new character of James was well described and well-portrayed, as he instantly gained fame amongst the Na'vi children which was amusing. I also got the vibe that maybe the writer of this fanfic simply just added himself into the story to see how it would turn out or maybe not. Overall I think is one of the better fanfics i've read.